Playing with Tits

tess mackenzie

Not that I’m actually trying to write post titles that just make people click on them, um.   It just kind of happened.

So this one is actually about writing, and what words I use.

I’m finding I have this recurring problem.  I don’t know what words to use to describe playing with breasts.

There’s this: he played with her tits.

Okay.  That’s cool.  I can do that once.

Later he sucks on them.  That’s cool too.

But what if he touches again, with his hand, like something else happens, and he gropes her a bit more.  What if I want something different in another story.

It’s the middle there, the second time, that’s the problem.  So played, cool.  Or touched.  Or stroked.  Or caressed, or silken caresses across her skin.

But people don’t really stroke your tits, do they?  No once everyone’s a bit het up.  What they actually do…

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